Short screenplays must be between 5 and 40 pages in length. Each Short Screenplay submission will receive one written analysis. Students will be eligible to submit their short screenplay at a discounted $35 rate for the duration of the competition.
To be able to enter this completion i will have to finish the screenplay before the final deadline of 15 of February.
Submitted scripts must be original screenplays, and the sole property of the applicant(s).
All ages are eligible.
All entries must be in English.
Feature screenplays must be between 75 and 125 pages in length. Absolutely no exceptions.
Short screenplays must be between 5 and 40 pages in length. Absolutely no exceptions.
There is no limit to the number of screenplays you may submit.
All entries must be uploaded in PDF format.
Under absolutely no circumstances will substitutions of either corrected pages or new drafts of the entry screenplay(s) be made. Screenplays will not be returned.
If a submitted screenplay becomes optioned, produced or purchased between the time of submission and the end of the judging period, that screenplay will no longer be eligible.
Competition judges, readers and employees of the BlueCat Screenplay
The idea of Betrayal and double crossings can be found in films such as Training Day and Lock, Stock and Two Smocking Barrels.The reason for the double cross is usually as it builds the tension built between the characters , which can be caused by two things :
1: A difference in character between the protagonists causing them to turn on the other in order to resolve that tension
2: One of the characters has a similar objective to the other character but this objective is changed by an outside force eg money , or inside force e.g actions of the other.
My influences were Training day as it gave the most ideas in handling the idea of betrayal and double crossing in this cased the topic was handled by separation in between the characters caused by behaviors an difference in moral standing , which i think influenced the way i handled the idea of a love triangle with in the story while this was not touched on in training day . Also the idea of the poker game came from Ocean thirteen which involved a casino heist. As the image of the gangsters , i was highly influenced by films like Snatch and Hooligan Street and Green Street. This allowed to create a more unrefined gangsters closer to the hooligan than the refined gangster.
More on Hooligans can be found here
I like this from a artistic point of view . The script it's moves very fluidly and creates a very suspenseful environment , giving my a idea about what good action means in a crime drama , in terms of pacing . The short begins with relaxed pace which is used to build suspense which reinforced by the fast paced middle act of the sequence.And it it helps intensify the ending
This shot gave me good of how a good chase created by always making sure that actions of the actions of the chase create a good idea of fear. This makes the pace of the sequence seems faster which is what is needed for a chase scene to succeed.
Context is used to show the setting of the series.this also use context in order to juxtapose the normality of submake with the out look of the shoper,which is given by use outer presence in order to show what kind a look the character has , also in this text this is used as context in order to show what world she live in and create tension. Further this also gives out a sense of slight abnormality in
the world of the character
Dialog is used order to strengthen a characters personality at the same time , establish somenes re relationship another character without giving away to much . Saying this dialog is abou what is being said
References
http://www.bbc.co.uk/writersroom/ ( 9 DECEBER)
http://shortsbay.com/



Well done Angelo, much better. Merit now achieved.
ReplyDeleteEllie